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Wednesday, August 10, 2016

Experience Writing - Munching Marvellous Marshmallows

Our wonderful student teacher Miss Weber bought us yummy marshmallows today.  We squeezed them, smelt them, explored them and then munched them.  Then we wrote, wrote, wrote about our marshmallows - have a look!
Nijel smelling our marshmallows.

Nathaniel squishing our marshmallows.

Erana smelling our marshmallows.

Dalton about to take a bite.

Room 3 loves marshmallows!

My marshmallow feels like powder.  Bella
My marshmallow smells like strawberries. Farhad
My marshmallow feels squishy.  Erana
My marshmallow is soft.  Surya
My marshmallow is soft like a pillow.  Paitynn
My marshmallow feels like a cloud. Daniel
My marshmallow is soft.  Eloise
My marshmallow is like a strawberry.  Marcus
My marshmallow is white like the snow.  Daiki
My marshmallow feels soft.  Brayden
My marshmallow is like a cloud.  Naweed
My marshmallow tastes like a strawberry.  Tayzsar
My marshmallow is little.  Dalton
My marshmallow feels soft.  Nijel
My marshmallow is soft and spongy. Maddy
My marshmallow is powdery. Nathaniel


2 comments:

  1. I like my marshmallows toasted over a fire... hmmmmm!

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  2. I love the way you used your senses to describe the experience of eating marshmallows. I like my marshmallows melting in a cup of hot chocolate - yummy!

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